this is really cool! I love how immersive it is and the way the backstory unfolds. The combination of the character's emotion with the decaying digital setting works really well.
at some points the music was totally bringing me into the story, and at other points it was distracting. I would have preferred it all to be more ambient/less active. the transitions between songs were also a bit jarring in their frequency but maybe I just read quickly
Nicely done. I muted the sounds, tbh but listened to each transition for a moment. It's a decisive interpretation of life as a vampire. The only change I would suggest is to remove the scrolling text at the bottom of the frame or at least allow it to be stopped or slowed.
Thanks for the feedback. Just added a settings menu where you can change the speed of the scrolling text as well as the font size. Having other people look at the game helps with this kind of thing.
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Great game! I enjoyed what it made me think about with regards to altering ourselves beyond recognition through the actions of others.
this is really cool! I love how immersive it is and the way the backstory unfolds. The combination of the character's emotion with the decaying digital setting works really well.
at some points the music was totally bringing me into the story, and at other points it was distracting. I would have preferred it all to be more ambient/less active. the transitions between songs were also a bit jarring in their frequency but maybe I just read quickly
Thanks for telling me about the music. You were right, so I went back and changed a lot of the songs to something more downtempo.
Love it--the tangled, uncertain memories; the undying obsession... Feels like it could also fit into the ongoing Queer Vampire Jam!
Thank you. I'll submit it there, I guess, since it does fit the concept.
Nicely done. I muted the sounds, tbh but listened to each transition for a moment. It's a decisive interpretation of life as a vampire. The only change I would suggest is to remove the scrolling text at the bottom of the frame or at least allow it to be stopped or slowed.
Other than that, it is a great short story!
Thanks for the feedback. Just added a settings menu where you can change the speed of the scrolling text as well as the font size. Having other people look at the game helps with this kind of thing.
I loved it! The aesthetics fit the story very well and i like the narrator's writing quite a lot.
Loved the discordant theme of the music and how it tied in with the narrator's desperation. Very intriguing!